Critical: Attracting Options
Beneath the low hum
of a graying sky, the fading
aura dissembles.
We were frankly warned
of this unexplained trend,
what it might mean.
In Tao, there is no
unsolicited urgency, only
the lone, myriad way.
-- Don Wentworth
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4 comments:
nice!
It is quite interesting the way you so surprisingly bring the Tao in at the end. You must have combed your articles carefully to come up with such a cohesive poem that has a sort of buried narrative that only becomes apparent at the end.
Jeff Hansen
http://experimentalfictionpoetry.blogspot.com/
Thanks, Greg and Jeff. I've often found when I haven't been writing in awhile, a challenge like this is stimulating. If your voice comes through, your true voice, you know you've hit it and I'm happy with this one. Oddly, I was (and am) attracted to certain words which made this easier than it might seem.
Don
Thanks, Greg and Jeff. I've often found when I haven't been writing in awhile, a challenge like this is stimulating. If your voice comes through, your true voice, you know you've hit it and I'm happy with this one. Oddly, I was (and am) attracted to certain words which made this easier than it might seem.
Don
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